Major Themes in Writing Arguments
At first I was cautious jumping into the Hillocks readings
because I felt that the activities and content in the book did not explicitly
focus on the teaching of argument writing. It felt more to me like the book
focused on developing sound arguments. Thinking about this a little more, I can
realize that this skill (making a sound argument) was not explicitly taught to
me, and it has been demanded of me countless times in essay prompts. Hillocks
reminds us that students are rarely taught HOW to interpret. The processes of
defining, judging, and assigning criteria for a sound argument are a writing
skill because they directly affect the content of most writing. The fact that
they affect our thought processes, debates, and conversations is just a bonus!
What I love about this process is that it is naturally
critical. These thought/argument formations can serve as the frame for all
critical thought and that makes it incredibly useful. I found the activities in
the chapters relevant to what Hillocks was supporting, but I can’t help but
feel like reading through all of them really enlightened my pedagogy too much.
The main take-away from the reading for me was the importance of discussion as
a precursor to flow (and therefore as a precursor to writing), that this can be
obtained by sense of competence and control, clear goals and objectives,
appropriately complex, provide clear feedback, good timing, and that judgment
is only the beginning of a good argument.
Online Role-playing
I was fascinated by the concept of collaborative arguments.
I had no idea how much persuasive essays really mislead students, but after
reading about them in all of our readings, I realized that I thought persuasive
essays WERE sound arguments when I got into college too. It did take me a while
to unlearn this. I think removing competition and potentially personal opinions
is much more transformative and useful for our students. I think that the
cooperative nature of this activity is a much more realistic and productive way
for students to strive for common good, negotiate, and determine what is really
important.
I think the online role-play forum is a great way to give
agency to students who might not feel like they have much of it. I have always
liked the idea of assigning a student a point of view to argue that is
differing from their own because it is a great way to look at sound evidence
without personal attachment, and therefore a great way to practice considering
multiple viewpoints.
Taking all of this a step further; is it more important that
our students understand exactly how to make a sound argument or that they
understand the social and political implications of the collaborative argument?
Does a sound individual argument give a student as much agency or sense of
competence and transformation as a collaborative one? It seems in some ways
like they have differing outcomes.
Links:
I thought that most of the Hillocks chapters mentioned the
importance of definition both in argument and in critical pedagogy. Here is a
list of different ways to define a word as well as words that are commonly used
in a critical social studies classroom. I think most of these terms transfer
into the English classroom as well.
To extend the conversation we had last week in class about
different levels of thinking, this
resource gives more concrete examples of Bloom’s Taxonomy.
This activity is
a philosophical experiment that is a collaborative analysis of “good art.” It
reminds me of the readings this week because it attempts to define good art,
and uses collaborative judgement to determine some kind of answer.
This is an NCTE resource about using
literature to teach inference (I know this seems like reading, but our
readings made it relevant!!)
Sara, I completely agree with your thoughts on Hillcocks and how he teaches students to create an agrument. Too often students don't have the tangible skills, in writing, to put down their opinion and back it up with evidence. Hillcocks does a great job of scallfolding this technique with his students.
ReplyDeleteAlso as you stated argumentation leads itself to critical thinking. Students can't be blasse with their thinking when writing an essay they have to have an opinion and state it loud and proud. Hillocks does a great job of setting his students up for success both in writing and the critical thinking world. My only reservation is what other kinds of writing is he teaching in his class? Where does the scallfolding stop and the students' individual work begin?